Bit of a mixed bag here Adrian. Your products are coming on well. Poster and cover look promising, though you must be posting other mock-ups to show progress. You also need an inside page and back cover, and to ensure all three items link together. Video is good, though you need to shorten some clips (3 second rule) add more live action (I'd close-up lip sync the chorus), and make it less repetative (lots of shots of bald man currently!). However, there is almost zero research and planning (analysis of videos, covers, posters, location shots, animatics, storyboards, shot lists, lyrical analysis, mock-ups) which means you are dropping easy marks. You need to address this over the hols as a matter of priority.
Bit of a mixed bag here Adrian. Your products are coming on well. Poster and cover look promising, though you must be posting other mock-ups to show progress. You also need an inside page and back cover, and to ensure all three items link together. Video is good, though you need to shorten some clips (3 second rule) add more live action (I'd close-up lip sync the chorus), and make it less repetative (lots of shots of bald man currently!). However, there is almost zero research and planning (analysis of videos, covers, posters, location shots, animatics, storyboards, shot lists, lyrical analysis, mock-ups) which means you are dropping easy marks. You need to address this over the hols as a matter of priority.
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